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Honorable Mention
From the Observation Deck in a Chinese Garden
Gary Blankenship

(The second in a series of transformations of Wang Wei’s River Wang poems.)

From the Observation Deck in a Chinese Garden

Where there are no walls, there are no doors;
nor windows to frame the world’s shape.
Above, a canopy of narrow yellow leaves;
beneath my feet, pits litter a splintered floor.

I tap dull, dark keys in muted silence;
sometimes starlings answer, sometimes dust.
No matter how far away I move
the city replies to questions never posed.

Move from the precipice. Beyond graffiti
and oiled river, through smoke and summer haze,
picture a simpler time, when all of this
might have been motes in a madman’s mind.

In a world without walls, there are no windows
to hold the moon, my songs.

*

Wai-lim Yip’s literal translation of Wang Wei’s Bamboo Grove

alone sit dark/secluded bamboo(s) among
strum lute and/again long whistle
deep forest man not know
bright moon come mutual-each other shine*

*to keep company by shining/illumination



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